Fitment

*have been fitting kits for a few years and have many happy customers in the UK - ..have been fitting kits for years...

*You have a kit that - IF you have...

*we will through - we will throw

*start some where - start somewhere

 

Re Spray and Painting

*Re Spray - Respray

*If u have - you

*need attended to - attending to

*you paint - your paint

*paint… or perhaps - paint, or perhaps

*your just sick - you're just sick

*colour… then - colour, then

*why not book in for a repair or respray. - respray?

* What ever - Whatever

*the problem is, our teams are sure to be able to fix the problem - Whatever the problem, our teams are sure to be able to fix it.

*When complete, the paint should last well and be reasonably resistant to stone chips. - Sell that product! "Should" and "reasonably" would give me doubts about using this.

*. - Random fullstop between paragraphs. "Lacquer" and "When"

*Taking short cuts here with cheaper back street painters won’t pay in the long run. - Would help to explain why - list the problems that *can* occur with "cheaper back street painters".

 

Specialist Paints

*spraying with specialist paints - spraying the..

*for example amount -For example, amount required

*colours recommend - recommended

*Basically what ever you need to know to help you make your final decision. - Yes? "Basically, we know everything necessary to help you...."

 

Tinted Lacquer

*this is gonna a big hit. - Ouch! "This is going to be..."

*its that simple!. - Pick a punctuation. "It's that simple"

 

Custom Work

*This is a combination of everything we do rolled into 1!… by this we mean fitting actual lexus clusters to calibra, fitting cossie arches to a corsa, putting saxo bumpers on a punto… again its very custom and is probably the 1 subject that has more possabilities than anything… how mad you make your car is your choice… if you think it can be done… we’ll do it!… phone for a quote This is a combination of everything we do rolled into 1!… by this we mean fitting actual lexus clusters to calibra, fitting cossie arches to a corsa, putting saxo bumpers on a punto… again its very custom and is probably the 1 subject that has more possabilities than anything… how mad you make your car is your choice… if you think it can be done… we’ll do it!… phone for a quote - <shudder> This is a combination of everything we do, rolled into one! By this we mean fitting actual Lexus clusters to a Calibra, Cossie arches to a Corsa, Saxo bumpers onto a Punto... Again, it's very customisable and is probably the one subject that has more possibilities than any other modification. How mad you make your car is your choice! If you think it can be done, we'll do it! Phone for a quote." May be worth putting in a hyperlink on PHONE so that your number pops up...

* its called - it's called...

* if you think - If you think

* way to go - way to go.

 

Done all that.
ive deleted the fooking contacts telephone number. bugger need to re think what to do now

 

De-Badging

*combine - Combine

*combine these sophisticated tools with our new rubbing and polishing compounds to remove glue etc left when removing badges or side strips. It now means that there’s no more respraying of panels because you’ve damaged your paintwork removing glue. - Combine these sophisticated tools with our new rubbing and polishing compounds and it means that there's no more respraying of panels due to damage to paintwork when removing the glue.

*wolfs clothing - wolf's clothing

*The more realistic side of it is cars that are modified with smoothness don’t want stickers and badges etc plastered all over them… - Realistically, cars that are smoothed don't want stickers and badges...

*not standing out like a car that’s ram raided an accessories shop - Doesn't sound terribly professional....

*are hardly gonna - going to...

*we all have to start some where and this is where the fun begins
- "somewhere" and needs a fullstop.

 

Headlight Conversion

.....??

Did we forget to write anything on this one?

 

Only added it last night

 

Your Ideas...

*us for a chat… - us for a chat?

*you never know - You never...

*reality!. - Punctuation

*has, perhaps - has. Perhaps

*anything YOU can - Anything

*can think of - Fullstop

*Sending an email -

Thankyou for submitting your enquiry.
You're visit is important to us. We will be in contact shortly.
"Thank you" "Your visit"

 

Koncept Cars

Nothing written here and also the "Call or Email" link at the bottom of the page does not work - get Page Not Found. As this has been copied onto every page, it means that every one doesn't work.

 

Mentioned that just above

ive being playing with php mailing scipts to i need to re think it.

 

Koncept Customers

*Visible number plate bottom left - T465 ***

 

Custom Exhaust

*Free-Flow, Billy is - Free-Flow, Billy, is

* and cars, call or email - and cars. Call or

*backboxes call or email - backboxes. Call or

 

what did you put in the email it doesnt go to me

 

NOS

*the states - the States

*be warned kids - remove the "kids" - it's patronising

*done by our selves - ourselves

*due to hearing so many horror stories - Unnecessary. "Fitting of this specialist item must be done by ourselves."

 

Restoration

*newest - Newest

*classic cars, take a look - cars. Take a look

...which would be hard considering that there aren't any photos on this page.

 

Style Parts

*what your after of have a rough idea - what you're after, or have a rough idea.

*we’re sure to me your needs. - to meet your needs.

 

Wheel Colouring

*testing is underway - Testing

*too long till - too long until

*the customers specification - customer's

*wheel condition and prices - ?? Should this be tacked onto the previous sentence?

 

About Us

*becoming more recognised daily for his abilty with automotive bodywork - steadily becoming more recognised for his *ability*...

*about the business would and gain - ?? "would and gain?"

*vast amounts of money was spent - were spent

*twodemo - two demo

*companies through out the UK - throughout

*ICE to show car standards - If you use ICE here, you should use ICE on the ICE page, not Ice... Consistency and all that.

*having anf MOT - an MOT

 

Done

 

Information

Page not found.

http://www.koncept-developments.com/info.htm

Clicky

 

Sales

Page not found.

http://www.koncept-developments.com/sales.htm

Clicky

 

WebMaster

Page not found.

http://www.koncept-developments.com/web.htm

Clicky

 

All done! These are the main "mistakes". The sentence structure isn't brilliant at times, but I'm not getting into too great a detail here.

Hope this all helps.

 

cheers! i owe you one!

 

If you're bored... Says it all really

 

From "Custom Exhaust"

How about:

We can produce a vast range of tailpipes, with sizes and styles to suit all cars and customer requirements. Call or email us to discuss the possibilities.
Each system is made using high quality stainless steel (18/10?). This grade is more resistant to road salt and water than that used by other big name custom exhaust builders. The quality can be seen by all, perfect welding, fit etc. We guarantee that you’ll be impressed...

or, if you want to make a good impression and get professional results, pay someone to proofread and review the whole site

Isn't big name custom exhaust builders a bit of a contradiction

Good luck.

 

super_si - was it you who allegedly knew "something" about a certain footballer and a certain other footballer's wife??

Based on your comments, i laid bets that there was an element of truth in it. Right now, i'm being called in for payment.

Is this just a patience thing, or were you hopping onto the back of a bandwagon...???

 

Ooh, and while we're here, before proof reader Mice steals it...!!