Help me with a poem
13 January 2009, 04:50 PM
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Help me with a poem
I need to put together a poem about my son having an allergy to pollen. [hayfever]
His allergy isn't particularly severe but he does take a bit of medication[Piriton] in the warmer months.
Can anyone who is gifted in this way assist in a little poem to express how someone could feel who suffers in this way.
Thanks.
His allergy isn't particularly severe but he does take a bit of medication[Piriton] in the warmer months.
Can anyone who is gifted in this way assist in a little poem to express how someone could feel who suffers in this way.
Thanks.
13 January 2009, 05:07 PM
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I really liked the scent of rose,
but pollen did not like my nose,
Like cats and dogs and horses too,
These all made me go, atchoo!
Piriton is my only saviour,
But, drowsy it makes my behaviour.
I wish it was a sunny day,
with the pollen out of the way.
Hayfever is a cross to bear,
Worse is the facemask I must wear
but pollen did not like my nose,
Like cats and dogs and horses too,
These all made me go, atchoo!
Piriton is my only saviour,
But, drowsy it makes my behaviour.
I wish it was a sunny day,
with the pollen out of the way.
Hayfever is a cross to bear,
Worse is the facemask I must wear
13 January 2009, 05:18 PM
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My God my nose is sore again
Ive been blowing it to hard
The only time it happens
Is when Im playing in the yard,
Pollen, Dust and other stuff
Just irritates my nose
It really makes me suffer
Everywhere I goes,
So all you people out there
Who do not have a clue
Its really is annoying
And be happy its not you.
Ive been blowing it to hard
The only time it happens
Is when Im playing in the yard,
Pollen, Dust and other stuff
Just irritates my nose
It really makes me suffer
Everywhere I goes,
So all you people out there
Who do not have a clue
Its really is annoying
And be happy its not you.
13 January 2009, 05:19 PM
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some good poems. i am not so good but here is a hopeful poem for your child
summer's here, i should be happy, but i cry
the rain is here i should be sad, but i smile
a flower blooms i should smell its perfume, but i daren't
the pollen report is on the tv, and i care
children are playing in cut grass, but not me
i stand back and watch from afar, but thats me
the doctor, then gave me some pills and some drops
now i can go play on the hills 'most non stop
until i have to come back home for my tea
and burst through the door, my hayfever and me
summer's here, i should be happy, but i cry
the rain is here i should be sad, but i smile
a flower blooms i should smell its perfume, but i daren't
the pollen report is on the tv, and i care
children are playing in cut grass, but not me
i stand back and watch from afar, but thats me
the doctor, then gave me some pills and some drops
now i can go play on the hills 'most non stop
until i have to come back home for my tea
and burst through the door, my hayfever and me
13 January 2009, 10:25 PM
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it itches my nose it iches my eyes
it mother natures pollen desguise
she puts it in plants ,grass and ,trees
mother nature please , please ,please
give me one day to play outside in the green
this sneasy burden is just so mean .
as i look at my friends running in the garden
please give this hayfever your mother nature pardon
or something like that
it mother natures pollen desguise
she puts it in plants ,grass and ,trees
mother nature please , please ,please
give me one day to play outside in the green
this sneasy burden is just so mean .
as i look at my friends running in the garden
please give this hayfever your mother nature pardon
or something like that
13 January 2009, 10:33 PM
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Kill all the flowers
Forget the twin towers
Eyes are streaming
What a **** feeling
and ban those fecking mowers
Forget the twin towers
Eyes are streaming
What a **** feeling
and ban those fecking mowers
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13 January 2009, 11:51 PM
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Stamens, Anthers, Bees and you,
love many flowers, As we all should do.
For me, although, it's a hopeless dream
As flowers make my eyes so stream.
I want to smell the sweetest rose
But the bliss is marred by a runny nose.
Jods
love many flowers, As we all should do.
For me, although, it's a hopeless dream
As flowers make my eyes so stream.
I want to smell the sweetest rose
But the bliss is marred by a runny nose.
Jods
14 January 2009, 01:09 AM
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summers here and now i lie
in the dark i'll have a cry
everyones out enjoying the day
my runny nose gets in the way
my eyes are water and throat is sore
mother close the bloody door!!!
once the summer months have passed
i'll have a winter cold thats sure to last
the only solace i can find
is in 7 years nature will be kind
hayfever seems in cycles to come
so i should be rid when im 21 !!!
ps: i used to get it bad as a kid !!
good luck
in the dark i'll have a cry
everyones out enjoying the day
my runny nose gets in the way
my eyes are water and throat is sore
mother close the bloody door!!!
once the summer months have passed
i'll have a winter cold thats sure to last
the only solace i can find
is in 7 years nature will be kind
hayfever seems in cycles to come
so i should be rid when im 21 !!!
ps: i used to get it bad as a kid !!
good luck
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