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There's a missing possessive apostrophe (car's, not cars) in your tag lines (nice and catchy though), and I imagine 'products' not 'product' would be more accurate, unless you only use a single product of course.
Other than that, it looks great.
Other than that, it looks great.
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The only thing that I dislike is the fact you don't have a website, are linking to a FB page and are using a gmail account for business.
You may be the best in the biz but that would put me off straight away so I'd never contact.
Good luck though!
You may be the best in the biz but that would put me off straight away so I'd never contact.
Good luck though!
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If I came across as 'harsh' that wasn't the intention, just giving him my opinion.
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Website is in the pipeline and domain names have been purchased.
The gmail email will be scrubbed once I have the website up and running and have a contact page.
As Chris has said I've spent a fair bit getting this far. Having to sell a JDM Hawkeye was a big step but enabled me to get this far without borrowing a penny.
The gmail email will be scrubbed once I have the website up and running and have a contact page.
As Chris has said I've spent a fair bit getting this far. Having to sell a JDM Hawkeye was a big step but enabled me to get this far without borrowing a penny.
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Hey bud, yeah, as I said, I wasn't trying to be a tw*t just stating what I thought would let 'business' down.
If you need any help re: website/domain/emails gimme a shout mate, happy to help.
And no, that wasn't me trying to grab some extra work, I'm already mowed out lol
Good luck
If you need any help re: website/domain/emails gimme a shout mate, happy to help.
And no, that wasn't me trying to grab some extra work, I'm already mowed out lol
Good luck
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Hey bud, yeah, as I said, I wasn't trying to be a tw*t just stating what I thought would let 'business' down.
If you need any help re: website/domain/emails gimme a shout mate, happy to help.
And no, that wasn't me trying to grab some extra work, I'm already mowed out lol
Good luck
If you need any help re: website/domain/emails gimme a shout mate, happy to help.
And no, that wasn't me trying to grab some extra work, I'm already mowed out lol
Good luck
Do need help with the website. All totally new to me. Got no experience at all.
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