well, a page full of posts (mainly irrelevant), but you've asked for some feedback, so i've had a listen, and there is definately potential there, the rhyming and rhythm are very good, as are the lyrics, the vocals need something, needs more passion is the word that comes to mind you need to believe in what you are singing because at the moment the vocal sounds almost like it is being read as it is being spoken recorded levels need a bit of work too, i.e. the vocal is too dominating in the mix and is not sympathetically matched to the backing track, try using vocal compression to manage the peaks. keep it up though...

 

find my page and add me yourself

 

I think I've found you!

You have PM

 

LOL, added

I did try messgaing you but it keeps playng up, just having a friend try and test it out for me

 

I got it cheers I'm just useless at replying

 

Job done

 

Odd it wouldn't let me send because I couldn#t move my cursor to type in the security check box

Been having probs when I message anyone, if I need to scroll after typing any text, I can't get my cursor out of the text box, it's driving me mad

 

<Ali G>

But Dey *is* Ghetto , dough, Ennitt ..

*Clicks Fingers*
Booyakashaaan...

</Ali G>

 

Hmmm hectic

 

Are they from Jamaica, or do they just talk, sorry 'rap', that way?

 

no we aint from jamaica lol but thanks for the feed back look 4ward to hearin some more we will be updating it soon and there is a new layout coming aswell where you will be able 2 read the text lol

 

Tbh only listened to the cascada sample not bad,makes a change from rappers talking about raping and shooting people. However the blue backround made my eyes bleed trying to read the text.

 

well as i said we are currently getting a new layout made. soo ill post back up wen its done.