View Full Version : Can this be improved ?


kbsub
16 December 2005, 12:27
What do do you think ?
Not enough going on ?
DOF too shallow ? (F/4)
Sharp enough ?
Thinking off sending it off to a print lab and sticking on my wall somewhere but I need to know if it can be improved upon and you lot seem to be a lot more critical than other forums i.e. If you dont like it you will say so ;)
By the way I love it so I suppose that's all that matters , But in a few years when I have beome more critical I might find loads of faults with it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/kbsub/lotherton%20deer/LOTHERTONHALLcopycopy.jpg

Diablo
16 December 2005, 12:29
Nice pic mate :thumb:

Has it been cropped at all?

kbsub
16 December 2005, 12:32
Nice pic mate :thumb:

Has it been cropped at all?

Nope , shot with Canon 350D and 70-200mm f/4 L about 70 yards away
Thanks :)

ChefDude
16 December 2005, 13:04
my eyes went straight to the clearing in the trees. then i looked at the stag.

Simon C
16 December 2005, 14:10
Thats a doe :D Not a stag, sorry to be a pedantic sod.

Try getting lower like lying on the ground, or a low crouch and you would have got rid of most of the distracting avenue, which as with Chefdude the eye is drawn to even though its out of focus.

ChefDude
16 December 2005, 14:18
d'oh!
a deer...

oh i'm too witty!

;)

Simon C
16 December 2005, 14:18
Or in my language, Lunch :D

Nexuas
16 December 2005, 14:43
d'oh!
a deer...

oh i'm too witty!

;)


A female deer...

Simon C
16 December 2005, 14:45
And is there anything you 2 want to get of your chests?? :D

Amd no I haven't seen that film, but I know where the quote comes from :D

Nexuas
16 December 2005, 14:47
Yes I have a 5 year old girl so am allowed to know the song...

Simon C
16 December 2005, 14:49
:o thats 1 thing I didn't know about you.

ChefDude
16 December 2005, 14:51
no, it's from the simpsons!
Homer: D'Oh!
Marge: a deer
Lisa: a female deer?
and so on...

Nexuas
16 December 2005, 14:52
Check out the transport comp picture she is in one of them...

Nexuas
16 December 2005, 14:53
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y208/Nexuas/PleasesircanIhaveago.jpg

walkpau873
16 December 2005, 15:06
I think its spot on, nicely caught!!!! :thumb:

At the end of the day, if you like it, thats all that matters really.

Paul:)

Hoppy
16 December 2005, 15:28
Since I've been beaten to all the deer jokes, I'll just say nice snap, well timed with an elegant pose.

But too much background - lose 2/3rds of the dark stuff, and lop some off the right so that there is more grass on the left hand side, in the direction where the moose/antelope/caribooo/jerrarf thing is looking.

Richard.


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