Diablo
21 March 2005, 11:33
Ok,
Here's a few pics of mine :)
Apologies for quality - they are scanned prints. Happy to receive any criticism, constructive or otherwise :p on composition, etc :)
"Mirror image"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0803/Diablo/zz2copy.jpg
"Tulips"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0803/Diablo/zz4copy.jpg
and the gratuitous car shot :p (needs a crop to bin the white line, and some PS work on the rubbish)
"Progress?"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0803/Diablo/zz1a.jpg
Will get some more up when I have some time.
Cheers
Scott
blueone
21 March 2005, 12:11
The reflection in the water is a bit dark, is there any way you could lighten this to show more detail? I would say add some more rubbish to the car shot, as it would give it a more 'urban feel' things like old newspapers blowing in the wind etc.
ArtistFKAN
21 March 2005, 12:43
Utter tosh, I could do better just randomly pointing at some stuff and using whatever settings were on the camera when I pulled it out of the alicampo plastic bag.
Oh wait, I already did....................:)
TelBoy
21 March 2005, 12:44
Don't tell mj, he's your biggest fan... ;)
messiah
21 March 2005, 16:40
Top image is a bit dark.
Tulip's image is good - I like it.
Rather than cropping the bottom image to lose the white line, I think It's be better to photoshop it out - cropping the pic would put the car too far down the image.
My 10p worth. :)
Tel - :razz:
a love for fine photographic art is not an easy burden to bear you know :notworthy
peasant :rolleyes:
:D
Mustapha Camel
21 March 2005, 18:38
mj I thought photographic art in your book meant taking snapshots of your mrs undressing without her catching you :D
she caught onto that trick ages ago :mad:
Its a bit tricky these days, I need a wide angle lens for the fat bloater :D
BOB.T
22 March 2005, 22:32
I would say add some more rubbish to the car shot, as it would give it a more 'urban feel' things like old newspapers blowing in the wind etc.
Fair go mate, he's already shot all those windows out!
:D:D
Franx
24 March 2005, 00:12
That one with the car and the warehouse - is that Liverpool by any chance?
I like that one btw. Quite an interesting pic:)
Diablo
24 March 2005, 11:08
Top image is a bit dark.
Tulip's image is good - I like it.
Rather than cropping the bottom image to lose the white line, I think It's be better to photoshop it out - cropping the pic would put the car too far down the image.
My 10p worth. :)
Good point on the line, cheers :)
The darknes in the top image is largely down to the scan, unfortunately.
Diablo
24 March 2005, 11:11
That one with the car and the warehouse - is that Liverpool by any chance?
I like that one btw. Quite an interesting pic:)
Not Liverpool. (I was parked for a good 10 minutes when I took that one, and the wheels are still attached :D )
Its Glasgow, down by Finneston for anyone who knows the area. That building has now been demlolished, though - flats going up instead.